--On the first mini LP - The lighting and text don't work. Lights are also too obvious
--Second is quite pretty, but I think it'd be better with more elaborate typography
--The two ichigo tags look terrible because you can't blend a manga scan with an actual image with dimensions.
--The other two tags are alright. The FF tag more so, even though it'd look much better with a longer canvas. The other tag feels like a 'I've hit the wall' - situation because you can't do much else to it without destroying it completely.
--The Composition on the Eye Burners Logo' is choppy and it looks incomplete because the concept feels too simple.